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One of the playable characters in my group's rpg. She's also the narrator of the story.
typical design: spunky little girl with a big sword :P

the design was made by ~white-momo and inked/colored by me.

I guess I'll try that critique thing today :) be as harsh as you want :P

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:iconarm01:
I like this character but the thing that bugs me is the characters right hand the one right below the left it looks a little off but. I think if you get some reference or use your own hand you can see what needs to be done. I think the reason why it looks off is because its a little small for the arm other than that she is pretty solid. Another thing, for me I would add more contrast in the short area. A cool trick if you are using photo shop is to mss around with the curves, maybe a little more in the blue cannel that way you can get your colors working in harmony. Good work overall!
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:iconwhite-momo:
o______o....i like it =P
:iconkholdy:
Loved the colors! Nice piece of work.
:iconpsyion:
amazing colouring/shading. Sword reminds me of the buster sword from FF7

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